look-et that cute floof, i want 10
it might just be me but i feel like the body might be to far to the left. aside from that and some anatomy issues, it has good coloring and the hair is well done. i also like the facial features, and, as weird as it sounds, the ear is really well drawn
one thing i noticed is the butt is lower on the back view than the right view. it also looks like the eyes are off in some of the expressions. that aside they are very expressive, the coloring is nice and hands are hell but you pulled it off
Ahh darn it LOL I thought so! I'll have to be more careful of making the front/back at least a bit more symmetrical ~ I'll also have to pay more attention to different facial expressions YuY sorry about that! and thank you for bringing it all to my attention~ I appreciate it!
it might just me me but i feel like the right (her left) could go out more to give her a fuller figure also the same leg seems to go in a little to far. it isn't major but minor stuff can really help a ton. otherwise i love the style, quite a cutie
Glad ya think so~ And yea i definitely see it too u<u But since it was just a sketch I didn't bother fixing it up to to much. If I finish it up I'll definitely improve those areas. thanks for the input uvu~
some line weights would really help add some depth where the water color couldn't otherwise great stuff
Thanks a lot for compliment and the tip! :D You've made me realized that is a common problem with many of my watercolour, wich is strange because I love adding weight on pencil/ink base peaces or things that I'll color in digital, while when I'm working on traditional and I can't know how things will end until they're finish (expecially with watercolour) it's like I'm afraid to be constrained by the lineart. I will be more carefull for the future! (even if the past peaces that I will post for fill the gaps while making new things would probably have the same issue :/)
maybe it's just me buy the non repeating pattern bothers me. Also the shading seems to lack reason with no clear source, and she seems to cast no shadow on herself. though these are honestly nitpicks as the picture looks very good
thank you, yeah i understand the pattern was sort of bothering me too because i got it off a Deviantart page as im using Paint Tool Sai, but thank you for the critique! I will definitely look out for these things in the future :o
out of items? no problem!
i do really like the style of this piece, in a world consumed by anime it's a breath of fresh air
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